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Catherine's Aunt
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 Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 2:52 pm Post subject: Feedback for A Christmas Story |
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| I had planned to add more to the ending, then I got stuck and decided to leave it like it was. I still can't decide if it needs more or not, so feedback is welcome. |
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michaelsmum
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| Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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I really enjoyed your fanfic, Catherine's Aunt. I thought you got the interactions between H & M and the feel of their banter just right. I thought the ending was good where it was.
Thanks for some great holiday reading!  |
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Karen M
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| Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:20 pm Post subject: Feedback |
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Very nice,
You did a wonderful job! Keep up the good work.
I just got up the courage to start back writing. I hope I can continue.
Again, wonderful story!
Karen |
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Catherine's Aunt
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 12:31 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks, guys. Glad you liked it. I have others over on the other site, I guess I should move them over here, huh? I also have another I've been working on for a long time, maybe I'll finish it over the holidays. |
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9Catsz
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 12:33 am Post subject: |
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Yes!! Oh my gosh yes, finished it.
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Catherine's Aunt
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:03 am Post subject: |
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| 9Catsz wrote: | Yes!! Oh my gosh yes, finished it.
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Hey 9! Love what you've done with your site, by the way.
You mean I SHOULD finish, or it's already finished like it is? |
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9Catsz
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Catherine's Aunt wrote: | | I also have another I've been working on for a long time, maybe I'll finish it over the holidays. |
I meant finish the one you're working on. I haven't had a chance to read the one you posted. I've been working on a lot of video to upload.
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roseblossom617
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| Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:47 am Post subject: great job!! |
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Catherine's Aunt,
Great job on your post!!! =)...I really liked how you interwove the emotional stuff with Hunter and McCall's typical interactions...I hope u will have some more writings 4 us 2 read!!
Take care |
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DeeDee
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:53 am Post subject: |
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Very nice and sweet story, Catherine's Aunt. Thanks for writing again. I absolutely can see the conversation between Hunter and McCall and his mom happening like you wrote.
Please keep writing more please. I still love Hunter's fanfiction and never tired to read it  |
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Catherine's Aunt
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 9:47 pm Post subject: |
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| DeeDee wrote: | Very nice and sweet story, Catherine's Aunt. Thanks for writing again. I absolutely can see the conversation between Hunter and McCall and his mom happening like you wrote.
Please keep writing more please. I still love Hunter's fanfiction and never tired to read it |
Like I said, I have one that I've been working on for over a year off and on. I've got 2 weeks off for Christmas and I hope to at least work on it some more if not finish it then. Normally I don't take that long, but when you read it, you'll see why it took me a while, the subject is pretty emotional for me and when I work on it, I need to know I won't have any interruptions for several hours at least. BUT, when it's done, I think it will be good. At least I hope it will, I've done all sorts of extra research related to the time period I'm setting the story in. |
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DeeDee
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| Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 12:32 am Post subject: |
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| You did a wonderful job, Catherine's Aunt! I hope to read more of your stories in the future. |
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michaelsmum
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| Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:28 am Post subject: |
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| I'm really looking forward to reading your new story, Catherine's Aunt, whenever you are able to get it finished. |
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Kimmer
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| Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:31 am Post subject: |
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Nice story! I love Hunter's mom. She seems like she would be a very cool mom to grow up with.
Can't wait for the next one!
 
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